小升初英语作文要避免的误区及范文
听、说、读、写、译，是我们学习英语中最重要的五个方面，不可偏废。前面发了一些关于口语和音标的帖子，有家长建议我写一些关于写作的内容。
大家都知道口语要说的地道，而我们的写作往往停留在中式英语的误区中，而且很难发现。
“为什么我的词汇量如此丰富却仍然写不出能让阅卷老师满意的作文?”相信不少同学都曾有过这样的疑问。词汇量的多寡往往并不是一篇英语作文质量好或者坏的关键。许多同学即便很努力地去准备作文，但最终分数仍然不理想，这很可能是因为他们陷入了某种写作的误区。今天，张译云老师就要为大家列举比较常见的三种英语写作误区，希望能帮小勇士们“对号入座”，并施以针对性的改进。
误区一：用中文思维串联英文词汇
一些同学在绞尽脑汁也写不出英语作文的情况下，会先按照题目写一个中文稿出来，然后再借助电子辞典翻译出一篇所谓的英语作文。还有一些同学习惯性地用中文的表达方式来写英语作文。这就造成了所谓的中国式英语作文。在这样的作文里，我们常常读到以下这类用中文的语法和英语单词拼凑出来的句子：
“When Iwas a child,my parents very love me。”(正确表达：When Iwas achild,my parents loved me very much)。
解决之道：强化语法
要想流利的掌握一门外语，你需要能够使用该语言思考。而将中文式思维转变为英语思维的最根本的途径之一就是强化语法知识。很多同学的词汇量很丰富，但是对于怎么用，什么时候用却并不明白。而这些恰恰是语法知识所能告诉我们的。哪些词要用在句中，哪些词应该用在句尾，语法里都有相应的规定。一旦用错了位置就会写成英国人看不懂的英语作文。另外，对于词汇所存在的不同的形态也应该注意。
误区二：过分“精雕细琢”而忽视了“大局”
不少同学在写英语作文时，将过多的注意力放在“优美的文笔”上面。因此，他们不停地用电子辞典搜集华丽的词藻，并运用难度颇高的句式，以期能让自己的作文“技高一筹”。但事实上，多数情况下会弄巧成拙。太生僻的单词同学们运用起来并不能得心应手，而且使用太复杂的句型也常常会出错。
解决之道：用平常心表达平常事
要写作要求学生能够综合运用逻辑、词汇和语法等多种知识和技能来完成一个写作任务，但并不苛求学生去做标新立异的.创作。因此同学们无需力求完美地到电子辞典里去找生僻的词汇，也不需要写得多么高深莫测，而是应该抱着平常的心态去描述自己看到的东西，表达自己想到的内容，将学过的词从记忆深处调动出来，复习语法课上学到的知识。用这样的心态写出来的东西内容虽简单但不乏生活气息，语言虽稚嫩，但却准确易懂。
误区三：文章冗长细枝末节过多
不少学生在写作中的一大担心就是文章的长度不够，再加上对于“可适当增减细节，不可字对字的翻译”的误解，于是便充分发挥想象能力，加入了很多离题较远的细枝末节。这样的文章写出来更像是一篇“大杂烩”，从中找不到任何主题。还有一些作文，句子和句子之间的连贯性不强，逻辑思维混乱，读起来让人摸不到头脑。
解决之道：理清思路，言之有物
我认为，很多人之所以写不够题目要求的作文字数，其中一个重要原因就是对于题目本身没有理解透彻。建议同学们不要急于下笔，而是先考虑清楚自己要说几点内容，这些内容之间的逻辑关系是怎样的。
作文开头不要写得太罗嗦，要找着恰当的切入点，快速入题，简洁明快，结尾同样不要拖泥带水。建议大家多使用一些关联词。有了这些词的连接，就会使文章变得语句通顺，层次清楚。另外，考生不用过度迷信一些使用难度较高的复合句，只要关联词搭配合理，短小的句型、简单的短语同样也能使文章出彩。
希望各位小勇士们可以说native的英语，写出native的表达。希望我的用心能对您有所帮助。
例文：
小升初英语作文:我的假期
I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship.
Then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.
At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.
This is a good holiday on the sun.
小升初英语作文:我的好朋友
My Good Friend
Zhang Ying is my good friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. She’s a model student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts and crafts, music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, too. But she doesn’t like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.
小升初英语作文:My Doll(我的布娃娃)
My Doll
Today is Sunday. I took out the nice doll again. Two years ago, my mother bought her for me on my birthday.
It is a girl. I like to call her "Yuan Yuan", because she has a round face, a round head and round eyes. Her nose and mouth are round too.
Yuan Yuan is wearing a red and white dress, a red hat and red shoes. There is a long pigtail behind her head. I can see a smile on her face when I come back home. How lovely she is!
Yuan Yuan and I are good friends.She looks like my little sister. I usually play games with her. She often listens to me when I tell her a story. I go to bed with her. I think I can't sleep without her.
I like yuanyan very much I think She likes me too!
我的布娃娃
今天是星期天，我又拿起了我的漂亮布娃娃。那是两年前我过生日时，妈
妈给我买的。
它是个女孩，我喜欢把它叫做“圆圆”。因为她有一个圆圆的脸蛋，圆圆的
头，圆圆的眼睛，就连鼻子和嘴也是圆的。
“圆圆”身穿白里．透红的裙子，戴着红色的帽子，穿着红色的鞋，头后梳着一条长长的小辫，我一回到家里就看见了她的脸上露出甜甜的微笑，多可爱呀!
“圆圆”和我是好朋友，她像是我的小妹妹。我经常同她一起做游戏，我讲故事时她常认真地听，她常常伴我入睡，没了它我真觉得还睡不着哩。
我很喜欢“圆圆”，我想“圆圆”也一定喜欢我吧!
小升初英语作文:我的业余爱好
My hobby
I am Cendy. I am in Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I am in Class 9, Grade 6. I am tall and thin. I live in Dali. I have many good friends. I often play with them.
I have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. But I like to read books the best. Because of reading books is good for my study. I also like riding bikes. Because of it does a lot of good to my body.
What’s your hobby? Can you tell me?
小升初英语作文:我的老师
My Teacher
My English teather is Mr Xu, his English name is Martin. His English is very good. And he always wears a pair of glasses. He likes wearing blue trousers. My teacher is handsome. He often plays with us after class. He often reads books and English. His hobby is reading books. Mr Xu likes drinking Coke and eating chips. Sometimes he is angry, because we are naughty. Sometimes he is happy, because we are good.
Mr. Xu is very good and handsome. We all like him.
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